I like how you made him bouncing the soccer the ball up and down. But maybe next have him actually play soccer rather than just bouncing a ball. Or maybe even him playing a one on one game with someone. But good job
Michelle, I liked the idea of your video overall, but i think you should have taken out the middle part where it said "intro to soccer" again because it creates a distraction from the video's purpose. The song you picked fit the video well, good job!
Michelle~ Good Job! I really like this video because it definetly reflects you and your life at home. Maybe you could have lightened the begging photos on photoshop but it was still very good. How did you come up with this idea?
I liked the concepy of the video however I am confused about the message you are trying to send. How does this video reflect who you are? Why aren't you seen in the video? -Alli Fuerst
I wish the soccer part was a bit longer than the slide that says intro to soccer, it would have been nice if you had a transition of kicking the ball from indoors to outdoors, but cool:)
I thought you animation was staged well, however I think the photos could have been cleaned up a little bit more. Your idea of using Soccer was great, because you were not in it, my question is do you like playing soccer as much as the person in the animation does? Good job.
Good job Michelle. Im guessing that you really enjoy soccer from your video. For future videos i think you should have made it longer to be more clear, and also be in it.
Michelle, I like how you used your brother for this video. It shows that you and your brother have a smiliar interest. But I agree with Elvira when she said you should have taken out the "intro to soccer" in the middle, just so there wasn't a break on between clips. Overall, good job!
I like how you made him bouncing the soccer the ball up and down. But maybe next have him actually play soccer rather than just bouncing a ball. Or maybe even him playing a one on one game with someone. But good job
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ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of your video overall, but i think you should have taken out the middle part where it said "intro to soccer" again because it creates a distraction from the video's purpose. The song you picked fit the video well, good job!
Michelle~
ReplyDeleteGood Job! I really like this video because it definetly reflects you and your life at home. Maybe you could have lightened the begging photos on photoshop but it was still very good. How did you come up with this idea?
I liked the concepy of the video however I am confused about the message you are trying to send. How does this video reflect who you are? Why aren't you seen in the video?
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I wish the soccer part was a bit longer than the slide that says intro to soccer, it would have been nice if you had a transition of kicking the ball from indoors to outdoors, but cool:)
ReplyDeleteI thought you animation was staged well, however I think the photos could have been cleaned up a little bit more. Your idea of using Soccer was great, because you were not in it, my question is do you like playing soccer as much as the person in the animation does? Good job.
ReplyDeleteGood job Michelle.
ReplyDeleteIm guessing that you really enjoy soccer from your video. For future videos i think you should have made it longer to be more clear, and also be in it.
Michelle, I like how you used your brother for this video. It shows that you and your brother have a smiliar interest. But I agree with Elvira when she said you should have taken out the "intro to soccer" in the middle, just so there wasn't a break on between clips. Overall, good job!
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